I did notice that the typos were a lot less obvious in this section - I suspected you'd proofed it more extensively than usual :) And for what it's worth, the ones that I noticed were all of the sort that are very challenging to spot - single missing or added letters that nevertheless are still valid words, or tiny words getting left out. Hard to spot those, especially when you're the author and are mentally filling in what you thought you'd written ;)

That said, I obviously missed the part where dude's age was mentioned, so we're even ;)