http://rumor-esq.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] rumor-esq.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] measured_words 2006-09-04 04:11 am (UTC)

Turns out Matteo is a pretty resourceful guy. This section is really good, some good suspense... a couple pacing and sentence placement issues, but very minor. Now, what's going to happen to poor Matteo lying in the street?
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