I looooooove the new Beast Wars section. The dialog is perfect. Can't wait to see more!
Minor detail, Dart's head turns towards Cheetor when Primal lifts the panel away, but when the Ark crashes, Dart's head is pinned and totally immobile, behind Hornet's leg. So either Primal is lifting what's on his head, or something shifted between crash and discovery? It's perfectly plausible as-is, but because the two bits contradict and the explanation is unwritten, it took me out of things for a second.
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Minor detail, Dart's head turns towards Cheetor when Primal lifts the panel away, but when the Ark crashes, Dart's head is pinned and totally immobile, behind Hornet's leg. So either Primal is lifting what's on his head, or something shifted between crash and discovery? It's perfectly plausible as-is, but because the two bits contradict and the explanation is unwritten, it took me out of things for a second.