ext_20971 (
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2006-05-10 03:35 pm (UTC)
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"trailing Lucca across that empty continent" makes me think of Dark Tower stuff :)
"I had no other clued" - clues
"Society seems by turned boring and daunting" - turns
"but it is still seems like something I *should* have thought of" - remove 'is'
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"I had no other clued" - clues
"Society seems by turned boring and daunting" - turns
"but it is still seems like something I *should* have thought of" - remove 'is'