"overwhelmed by the distance between he and I" - 'between him and me' would be better here :)
"The street apparently has more permanent residence as well" - should it be residents?
"because it was good to remember that other people were real, and of the commonness of the human condition." Is there a word missing in this sentence? It seems a bit off.
"Bruce Li as Kato, addresses to Dimitri" - Isn't it usually Lee? And addressed.
"I could examine the merchandise ore critically" - more

So, how much is Daniel you? ;)