Shadows 5.1
Yeah, I do think this should come first, and then the scene with Lorella and Tavik, and then Valentine and Hadyn. And then the last bit, which should be complete fairly soon! This is kind of long, relative to other sections, but once again I was working from a log (ugh). If I'm lucky, this one will flow a bit better :)
( Shadows 5.1 )
Shadows 5.2
I think this will actually wind up being 5.3, in the end, but I haven't gotten around to typing up 5.1 properly. In anycase, thanks agai to
rumplefurskin for suggesting using Val as a PoV person, leting me borrow him, and then proofing to make sure that I didn't misuse his character. I think this worked out quite well :)
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Shadows 5.1
Posted late because I have been studying like a madwoman for an exam that may not even be until next week now :V I actually had it finished on Saturday, bah! Also, this section may get reordered in the final version of this chapter - I haven't decided yet.
( Shadows 5.1 )
Shadows 4
This chapter only has two sections, and really only the econd part here is new. It is also adapted from an IRC log. I didn't actually write any of Lendrick's dialogue, although I did edit it a bit and filter everything though Hadyn's pov. Irc is an interesting tool, in this sense, but editing logs is a pain in the butt :p I am generally okay with writing other people's chatacters to a point, but for big scenes like this it can be more interesting to play it out and see where it goes on its own :) If anyone is interested in Lendrick and his adventures, Bart has put some bits of them up on the wiki over here. Rar!
( Shadows 4 )
Shadows 4.1
I finished it yesterday and typed it today. Sonce I need collaboration for the next bit, I've actually been working on bits for an *original* story today, though I haven't made great progress. I'll keep going with that tomorrow, I expect, and maybe the rest of the week. And if I get stuck I'll work on typing up and polishing another original I finished a while ago (like last year or so ;). Please feel free to correct my French. I mean Elven ;)
Also also this series could use its own icon, I reckon. That or I need a generic 'gaming story' icon. Anyone?
This chapter contains scenes of pretty graphic violence, so if you are disturbed by that sort of thing, you may want to pass.
( Shadows 4.1 )
Also also this series could use its own icon, I reckon. That or I need a generic 'gaming story' icon. Anyone?
This chapter contains scenes of pretty graphic violence, so if you are disturbed by that sort of thing, you may want to pass.
Shadows 3.3
I even met my personal schedule, though I have realized that I need o fix something in 3.2 to have my timeline work. eh- whatever. It is close enough :)
( Shadows 3.3 )
Shadows 3.2
Too tired for further commenary. Will revise for likely horrendous typos later. ZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
( Shadows 3.2 )
Shadows 2.4!
I finished the last section of this chapter, yay! That leaves two chapters, at least, that I want to finish before we actually play again next Sunday, and Three if I'm really lucky. One is already started, at least. Anyone who wants to read this chapter all the way through can find it on its home at the Exia wiki, over here.
( Shadows 2.4 )
Fantasy vs Reality vs Reality
New internet toy = fun! Writely.com brings you the following conversation excerpt from two minor Pieces characters: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=d2xdxqb_0dmm7xj
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vignette
Just a short vignette, probably one of a few I feel like writing out today...
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“Jennifer Madeline Turner.
I love you, I love you, I love you.”
He liked to watch her sleep, in these rare moments when she seemed at peace. No nightmares, no night terrors, no anxious frowns. Just real rest. Her hair spilled out across the sheets like a wound. People said all sorts of things about redheads – kissed by fired, touched by the sun. Luck of the Irish. Other nonsense. But fire and the sun only burned those who got too close. And Irish luck all seemed to sour.
“Jennifer Madeline Turner.
I love you, I love you, I love you.”
No one understood how he felt about her, leastwise Alex himself. He couldn’t explain. He’d known her since high school, and even through the roughest patches those days had offered them both, he’d wanted nothing more than to be by her side. To watch over her and be close and wanted. She’d been gone from his life for years after the fire that changed everything. He thought he’d been doing well for himself until she showed up again, and he felt the great gaping hole that was her absence.
“Jennifer Madeline Turner.
I love you, I love you, I love you.”
The repetition comforted him, though he couldn’t say why. It just seemed right. Felt complete. He knew she didn’t feel the same. Yes, she cared for him, maybe even loved him in her own broken, twisted, way. But this was more than he could express. And maybe more than love, or not just, or…. He didn’t know. But she could, had, and would hurt him, time and time again. Every time it was a fresh wound, that stung and bled and scarred. Sometimes she didn’t even know or mean it. But as much pain as she caused him, she was part of him. He couldn’t give her up if it meant his life.
“Jennifer Madeline Turner.
I need you, I need you, I need you.”I need you, I need you, I need you.”
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“Jennifer Madeline Turner.
I love you, I love you, I love you.”
He liked to watch her sleep, in these rare moments when she seemed at peace. No nightmares, no night terrors, no anxious frowns. Just real rest. Her hair spilled out across the sheets like a wound. People said all sorts of things about redheads – kissed by fired, touched by the sun. Luck of the Irish. Other nonsense. But fire and the sun only burned those who got too close. And Irish luck all seemed to sour.
“Jennifer Madeline Turner.
I love you, I love you, I love you.”
No one understood how he felt about her, leastwise Alex himself. He couldn’t explain. He’d known her since high school, and even through the roughest patches those days had offered them both, he’d wanted nothing more than to be by her side. To watch over her and be close and wanted. She’d been gone from his life for years after the fire that changed everything. He thought he’d been doing well for himself until she showed up again, and he felt the great gaping hole that was her absence.
“Jennifer Madeline Turner.
I love you, I love you, I love you.”
The repetition comforted him, though he couldn’t say why. It just seemed right. Felt complete. He knew she didn’t feel the same. Yes, she cared for him, maybe even loved him in her own broken, twisted, way. But this was more than he could express. And maybe more than love, or not just, or…. He didn’t know. But she could, had, and would hurt him, time and time again. Every time it was a fresh wound, that stung and bled and scarred. Sometimes she didn’t even know or mean it. But as much pain as she caused him, she was part of him. He couldn’t give her up if it meant his life.
“Jennifer Madeline Turner.
I need you, I need you, I need you.”I need you, I need you, I need you.”
Shadows 2.3
The first part of this was a writing exercise for the August writing challenge, as I believe I might have mentioned previously. However, I decided to use the same format for the last bit of dialogue as well. It seemed to fit. Teah's not big on details ;) In anycase...
( Shadows 2.3 )
Shadows 2.2
The next segment in the Hadyn story stuff. I switched t using tildas for the telepathy because the wiki code uses commas for something else and it is just easier to fix at the typing stage. Enjoy!
( Shadows 2.2 )
That Hadyn thing
I have decided on a name for my Hadyn story: Shadows. it is really not just about Hadyn anymore anyway, though he will still be one of, if not the, key player(s). I ahve also decided that in order to help the flow of things when i do big time jumps, I will collect the smaller sections into larger chapters. So, here is all of chapter 1 - the only new bit is right at the end. Coming up shortly will be 2.1. Enjoy :)
( Shadows 1 )
Summoning
I wrote this yesterday for the daily challenge for the
august_writing. Take 1 is the rough, took me ten min to pound out on paper, retyped this morning, draft. Take 2, once it is up, will be a little more polished, but not extended until I talk to Bart.
( Take 1 )
( Take 2 )
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More Hadyn stuff
I've been working on this for a while now. I know what I am doing next but I don't have any more written yet, which is a first. Usually I am a chapter ahead in my paper journal, but not this time. Anyway... I stil need a name for this ;)
( Part Three )
Hadyn II
This is the second part of the Hadyn story I am trying to write. I transcribed it from something I wrote a few weeks ago. The third section is just started, but I do want to finish ice. his just seemed like a good project for tonight since I'm not really awake enough to be really creative. Enjoy!
Part I
( Part II )
Part I
Hadyn
This is the beginnig of an ongoing story I'm doing about Hadyn. This is the first section, and I have another bit started as well. I don't have a good name for this yet... In fact the main reason I have typed it up and am posting it here is that I am not at home and have no way of saving a portable electronic copy. Im sure this is riddled with horrible terrible typos - it was typed in notepad, as I haven't yet actually proof-read it ;) This will probably not be much interest to anyone who is not familiar with Exia, as there is a lot of backstory, but for anyone who is curious and clueless, I'd like to know your impressions. Otherwise, there is also information on some of the characters at least over at the game wiki.
In anycase,
( On with the show! )
In anycase,