Also, I changed it to "Who wouldn't, who might have noticed or talked to me?"
I don't know if that makes my intent clearer or not - what I am (or, er he is?) trying to say is that he expecta that anyone who is given half a chance will probably pick up on the fact that there is something wrong with him.
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Date: 2006-05-10 04:56 pm (UTC)I don't know if that makes my intent clearer or not - what I am (or, er he is?) trying to say is that he expecta that anyone who is given half a chance will probably pick up on the fact that there is something wrong with him.
Not that this is necessarily *true* ;)