Pieces Part Twenty-Three

Well, I wasn't sure I'd make it there for a bit! In any case, here you are! This sort of took off on me, but it will lead to interesting places, I think. Comments welcome, as always. Please let me know if it works, and makes any kind of sense, and if it is confusing if it is *too* confusing... Part of the problem of a purely first person narrative is getting thiem to explain thngs, especially when they don't always know. Anyway. I'm tired :V

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