"Even fiction falls flat in comparison to my own experiences. The television shows little but mindless garbage, and even the popular crime and medical dramas fall flat for me." Seems a bit redundant...
Typos:
"I see them only as propaganda, and the fail to hold my interests." - they "Alot's happened since you've been away. I'm one of two senior admin's in the region now" - I'd say 'A lot', and 'admins' "You're file is filled" - your "its there if they know what you're looking for" - it's
'The Order' is sometimes capitalized, sometimes not.
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Date: 2006-05-10 03:15 pm (UTC)"Even fiction falls flat in comparison to my own experiences. The television shows little but mindless garbage, and even the popular crime and medical dramas fall flat for me." Seems a bit redundant...
Typos:
"I see them only as propaganda, and the fail to hold my interests." - they
"Alot's happened since you've been away. I'm one of two senior admin's in the region now" - I'd say 'A lot', and 'admins'
"You're file is filled" - your
"its there if they know what you're looking for" - it's
'The Order' is sometimes capitalized, sometimes not.