Date: 2006-05-10 03:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curtana.livejournal.com
"trailing Lucca across that empty continent" makes me think of Dark Tower stuff :)

"I had no other clued" - clues
"Society seems by turned boring and daunting" - turns
"but it is still seems like something I *should* have thought of" - remove 'is'
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