Hmmm, i guess you are correct, and i have been misunderstanding boggle! I would be more apt to say she *was* boggled than that she boggled.
Anyway thanks for other comments. Fights are intimidating to write, but i think it worked out pretty well And yeah, Ayel doesn't think a lot about his relationship with Nero in that way, but I'm glad that it is coming out well anyway.
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Date: 2009-07-27 06:18 pm (UTC)Anyway thanks for other comments. Fights are intimidating to write, but i think it worked out pretty well And yeah, Ayel doesn't think a lot about his relationship with Nero in that way, but I'm glad that it is coming out well anyway.